bad song

just cause it rhymes
a couple times
doesn’t turn those lines
into music that defines

just cause that bass
is at its ace
doesn’t make that pace
save your face

just cause that pitch
is high and rich
doesn’t make the switch
any less of a bitch

the song is addictive
the lyrics are deductive
but the heart is inactive
work hard. B+

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